Over christmas I continued editing and proof reading my draft which I now feel happy to hand in as my first one. In total it is around 26 pages. However, I know there is areas of improvement still. I think my referencing system still needs some work as I don’t feel I entirely understand what bits I need and also my formatting needs some work too. I’m unsure as where to go with my essay now which is a concern of mine as I’m aware the deadline is getting closer now. Getting my first draft marked would be very useful to focus on areas of improvement. But as it’s being mark I’m going to continue improving and altering it too.